You, sir, are awesome!
I really had a great time watching it, you have a nice simple oldschool cartoon design, mixed with nowadays great animations, it is a comedy, but ther drama is injected under it, and shows up every time, making it really emtional and bonds the audience with te characters, I love the jokes, I love the animation, I love the story, I can't wait for the next episode, I can't really nitpick anything, maybe an englis dub later would be neat, there are plenty of talented voice actors (heck even I would be in extasy if I could participate in this.
What's the song at the ending credits? I want to have that.
Nice little animation, music is fitting story is fine, I would have kept the dream parts pencil colored all during the movie, it would have given a troubleless childhood feeling, I really love the negative images in it also, some conclusion or the phisicall presentation of the emotions could have benne a bit more detailed and expanded, cause it's now doesn't feel like it has a proper end.
I give an 8.
I'm glad you liked it. And, I agree with your review. I don't like the ending either, but couldn't figure out another ending that would fit with the music timing.
It's a really good thong for start, tha animation is nice, the design is great, the music is nice, I give it a 9, cause I think there could be more in this, like story development, personalities, disuccsions, the whole thing is looking so great it screams for an explained background, for something that could make it more outstanding from the already professional scene what is it in. That's why I keep a point because I think this is olny a beggining, you should go get a much higher distance from this. Don't be satisfied with only that succes, build more, For thia gneration this could be what was martial art movies was for the elder.
I feel there is much more in you with this. Keep rollin. And I'll give a 10 for it.
Deffiniatelly do some more clay stuff, it's great, the fonts are a bit off, needs more fitting style, but otherwise it's damn entertaining, keep it up.
Controls not responding well
I was thinking about it could be my crappy machine, but I doubt it, the controls are not responding well and that's a huge, non intended set back, and difficulty, sometimes the spaceship moves over, sometimes it doesn't respond, and since the meteorits are randomly comming the difficulty is all up to luck. A designed out stage, and a better controls would have made a better experience now it's just frustration. The concept is fine, reminds me to the meteorit avoiding minigames in MDK 2. The music is fune, The graphics are nice, but the controls and the leveldesign needs a huge polish.
I give a 6.
Does it's task
To be honest the first few secounds with the fanfare is the best for an epic vitory after a boss batle, but the whole is more like an end creditts music, with a "what happened after" animation, or maybe I can imagine for a stats hud. Anyway nice job, but a bit heroism could have been there, it's a bit calm for a victory, but it does have the feel.
well the game is called "Simply Beautiful", so rather than go with an in your face heroic theme i wanted to go with something softer that still kind of conveyed the mood
I really like the marriage of chiptune and drum and bass, seriously it's really an awesome concept and it's played out nicely, great for an adrenalin filled game or a NES/SNES style racer. It could have been a bit longer, with some more variations, an extended version perhaps. But it deserves all the points.
I heared this from you previously since I know you but I have to tell that I still love this theme, hope the others will also get up, it's a really happy go lucky theme, as what you usually do. So keep it up, hope to hear more.
From a fellow TenNapelite
Hey man, nice to see you posting stuff there.
I really love all your extremely absurd characters, shapes and poses.
It's like Ren & Stimpy... on crack.
Keep it up.
Oldtimer Rayman fan's here, played through all the games except Hoodlum Havoc, but I have it and I saw it. It's really a heartwarming thing to see fellow fans there. Your stile is resembling to origns, so it's kinda feels fresh. I really love it. It seems to me that it was not realy decided that if you would go a dark forrest tone or would you go with a sunny one. Or at least I sense it'sa kinda split dcision there with the dark purple background and the light coming frim thel eft of the foreground. It could be the reason to make the whole image a bit steril. but that split feel makes the image a bit chaotic by colors, I think it would have been better to choose a bitmore wisely from the colorpalette. You see basically all the forrest themes in games had a leader color (mostly green) and the other colors arenged from this, so I think a decision of used color palette spectrum would havebeen usefull and maybe adding some grayscale. But this is just monor complain I'd keep only one point cause of this. It's a really nice piece.
Like a game
Feels like a Behemoth/Newgrounds mascot's crossover game. This would be the selection screen, I really like it that way, nonethless it's more than that. The artistic direction makes it way more, really good piece.
Yeah I was playing with the idea to have their names under the characters or some cursor or something, but left it like that in the end
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